Tuesday, March 23, 2010
Cookies by Celinphotography
Today's Critique brought to you by: Celinphotography
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 3.5/5
Overall:
This photo is very nice. It accurately portrays the soul of these cookie. The composition is interesting.
Composition:
I think another angle would have been more powerful - perhaps from below? - but the current angle is quite good. The cookies contrast well with the background, giving them dominance.
Emotion:
Aye, ye've acc'r'lty capt'red 'he soul o' t'em cookies. I'm assuming they make the viewer feel hungry (not me, but that's a personal matter). They look very innocent and harmless, to be sure.
About Celinphotography:
Celine has always loved to take pictures. She got her first reflex camera at age seventeen. Celine is currently an art student. She enjoys photojournalism.
Tip of The Day:
Capturing the essence of food is difficult.
Monday, March 22, 2010
Chains by Wiseman500
Today's Critique brought to you by: Wiseman500
Scores
Overall: 3/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 3.5/5
Overall:
I like the colors and the concept.
Composition:
I don't like how the chain near the top is out of focus, it's distracting to me. The white thing (a bolt?) is also rather distracting. The colors are nice. I like the subdued tones of the photo.
Emotion:
This photo has subtle emotion. The feeling of being chained to something, be it a pole, a bed, or a relationship is definitely there.
About Wiseman500:
Mateo has been a photographer for three years, though they've only been serious about it for the last year and a half. Mateo loves macro photography and nature photography. "I love being able to see things from a new perspective and being able to show that to others," they say.
Tip of The Day:
It feels weird to take photos out in the world, but it's actual very beneficial.
Sunday, March 21, 2010
Black-eyed Susan by Growerman
Today's Critique brought to you by: Growerman
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I love the colors, the contrast and the composition. This photo is very nice. Of course, being that I'm critiquing this, I'll have to find something you could do better at.
Composition:
The colors and lighting are gorgeous. The yellow contrasts well with the green background as well as the brown of the centers of the flowers. The focus is very nice. I think I'd like to see a little more space to the left of the center of the flower, since it seems kind of cut off and/or cramped. Moving the left edge a little further left would also make better use of the rule of thirds, too.
Emotion:
This reminds me that we're only a few months away from Summer vacation (and, you know, sleeping in until noon every day). It's very summery and bright. I can almost feel the sunlight.
About Growerman:
Growerman has been photographing the natural world for four or five years.
Tip of The Day:
Capturing the perfect lighting is difficult, but totally worth it.
Saturday, March 20, 2010
All The Little Duckies by EmersonStem
Today's Critique brought to you by: EmersonStem
Scores
Overall: 3/5
Composition: 3/5
Emotion: 3.5/
Overall:
I like the colors, the contrast and the concept.
Composition:
I think I'd like it better if the purple one was in focus, too, as it's somewhat distracting. I like the contrast between the candy and the grass. I think the green one is a bit unnecessary, seeing as it doesn't really stand out against the grass. The lighting is very nice, and the contrast between the orange and yellow candies is very nice, too.
Emotion:
They look like they're waiting for something, rather than following something. Like they're in the middle of a game of Red-Rover, or something. I like the effect of the grass being taller than them, since it gives the photo a sense of smallness.
About EmersonStem:
Emily has been an amateur photographer for around 3 years. She just got her first DSLR around a week ago, and she's been learning a lot about it every day. She loves taking pictures of people. She also likes macro shots. Emily likes anything that shows color and life.
Tip of The Day:
Variety is the spice of life: vary your subjects and methods every once in a while.
Friday, March 19, 2010
Abandoned by Sillysally3456
Today's Critique brought to you by: Sillysally3456
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I like this photo, because it has nice focus, lighting, and angle. I just have a few minor complaints.
Composition:
The black spot in the background at the top right is somewhat distracting. I'd like to see more space to the left of the bloom. I like the angle, and the lighting is very nice. The rose contrasts well with the white backdrop. Black and white was a good choice.
Emotion:
The black and white effect gives it a bit of an old-timey feel. The fact that the rose is on the ground tells me that it's been discarded for some reason, which leads me to wonder why it's been abandoned. Making the viewer think it a good thing, kudos.
About Sillysally3456:
Sally's been a photographer for about a year. She likes still life, macro, and landscape photography.
Tip of The Day:
Photography is all about documenting a moment's moment in visual form. Try to document it in an interesting fashion.
Thursday, March 18, 2010
132 by Blackeyedwitch
Today's Critique brought to you by: Blackeyedwitch
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I really like this photo. There are a few distractions in the background, but they're not really too consequential. The lighting is very nice, and there's a lot of emotion present.
Composition:
You can see part of the rest of the town/city on the left where the steps end, which is somewhat distracting. The lighting is great, and the capture of the birds in flight is wonderful. The contrast of the person and the door with the fairly subdued tones of the rest of the photo is very nice.
Emotion:
This photo is so cool. It reminds me of any number of the fantasy novels I've read. It'sa dark, and seems kind of apocalyptic to me. The seemingly oldness of the building and the steps really adds to the feeling.
About Blackeyedwitch:
Blackeyewitch has been a photographer for a year now. She likes HDR photography. Judging by this piece, her work is amazing, so go check her out!
Tip of The Day:
Photography is not something you do, it's something you are.
Wednesday, March 17, 2010
78, Drink by Saenzlove17
Today's Critique brought to you by: Saenzlove17
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 3.5/5
Overall:
I like the angle and the concept. The lighting seems a little dark - but that's probably just the PC I'm using.
Composition:
I think I'd like to see more of the straw. The lime shows very nice contrast, and the focus is very nice. The yellow and red things in the background are distracting.
Emotion:
The drink looks cold. The lime brings a touch of tart flavor to this photo. It makes me kind of thirsty.
About Saenzlove17:
Bayley's been a photographer for two years. She likes still shots, since "things that are moving aren't really [her] thing."
Tip of The Day:
Depending on the monitor you're using, colors and lighting looks different when you upload your photo to your computer.
Tuesday, March 16, 2010
Bright Blossoms by RainsOfChange
Today's Critique brought to you by: RainsOfChange
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion:4/5
Overall:
The colors are nice. The depth of field is great. There's just one thing I don't like.
Composition:
I don't like the blurry blossoms in the foreground. I feel they detract from the subject. The colors and lighting are nice.
Emotion:
This is very lively. It's captured the essence of spring quite nicely. Makes me want to have a picnic. Though, I'm under the impression that the tree is probably naked by now.
About deviant:
Myra doesn't call herself a photographer, since she just takes photos whenever she has her camera and she sees something nice nearby. She enjoys capturing nature and the sky.
Tip of The Day:
Pictures of clouds are all fine an well, but they're usually quite boring. It's best to take picture of clouds only when said clouds are extraordinary.
Monday, March 15, 2010
Still by My-Colorless-Project
Today's Critique brought to you by: My-Colorless-Project
Scores
Overall: 3.5/5
Composition: 3/5
Emotion: 3.5/5
Overall:
I like the lighting. There are a few distractions, as with every photo.
Composition:
I'd like to see more of the ferris wheel. The thing in the bottom right corner is kind of distracting. I like the space on the left, I feel it gives the ferries wheel a more whimsical feel. I think maybe color would have been a better choice for this photo. I like the lighting, though it could be a bit lighter.
Emotion:
The lighting you've got going on here strikes me as more of a Zombie-Land carnival of horror kind of lighting - with that in mind, I'd like to see more Zombies (I'm kidding). I think brighter lighting would give this more of a fair/carnival feel.
About deviant:
Melly has been trying photography for around a year, and yet she still doesn't consider herself to be a photographer. She, too, doesn't have a favorite, and just like shooting things that catch her eye and give her ideas for her own photos. If you like her work on My-Colorless-Project, she's got another account. However, I can't link it to you, because I'm lame and didn't write it down.
Tip of The Day:
There are many online communities that can help you receive appreciation and critique for your photos.
Sunday, March 14, 2010
Kimi 5 by Tienlove
Today's Critique brought to you by: Tienlove
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I really like the lighting and the pose. I think black and white was a good choice. There are just a few things I'd change.
Composition:
First, I'd like to say that the lighting is beautiful. It's very summery. I'd like to see more of her hands. Also, I think the photo would be a little nicer if the line where the grass stops wasn't going through her head, or wasn't shown at all.
Emotion:
This photo is very summery, like I said. Kimi looks somewhat happy, and contemplative, as though she reflecting on how nice the day is, or something. It's very nice.
About deviant:
Tien has been a photographer for about two months. She hasn't got a favorite shot; she just takes pictures of whatever catches her eye. Her blog is Paradigm Drift.
Tip of The Day:
Remember the Fffs of photography: Focus, forsight, and fun. Remember to focus when you shoot things, as well and keep your shots in focus. Have the foresight to notice the flaming chicken in the background. Have fun taking pictures of the flaming chicken, instead.
Saturday, March 13, 2010
Reaching Out by Neon-Monkey
Today's Critique brought to you by: Neon-Monkey
Scores
Overall: 3.5/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I like the contrast and the composition. Good depth of field. There are a few distractions, though.
Composition:
The flowers contrast quite well with the greens and greys of the rest of the photo. The flower in the very bottom of the left corner is somewhat distracting, as is the stripe of grey.
Emotion:
This photo reminds me of summertime. It's very vibrant and has good lighting.
About deviant:
Chris has been taking photos for about 10 years, but it's only in the last two years that he's been thinking about what he shoots. His favorite kind of photos are macro shots. He also likes "the idea that one can go down and watch what the 'bugs' can see." Chris collects pictures of graffiti, stating that it can often be very challenging just to get the whole piece in the photo.
Tip of The Day:
If you run out of inspiration for photographers, take a break and do something fun. For example, go epically own someone at Mario.
Friday, March 12, 2010
Yellow Daisy by Saritita
Today's Critique brought to you by: Saritita
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition:4.5/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I really like how simple this photo is. The contrast is nice, and the focus seems good. I think an aspect or two of the background might be a bit distracting.
Composition:
I, personally, like that you placed the flower in the center, because the space around it seems balanced. You have nice leading lines, and if this were an advertisement and the text were place in the top right corner, it would certainly draw your attention to the text. The yellow contrasts very well with the green background. I think the light green spot by the stem is somewhat distracting.
Emotion:
The darkness of the photo makes me think that this daisy is longing to see the sun again.
About Saritita:
Saritha's been taking photographs since she was about 10. Her favorite subjects are flowers and animals in macro, and she's starting to photograph airplanes. However, she likes every kind of shot, too. Her Gallery's pretty awesome, so go check it out.
Tip of The Day:
If you're going to go to Seattle, try to get an interesting picture of the Space Needle.
Thursday, March 11, 2010
Wall Puddle by JoGuge
Today's Critique brought to you by: JoGuge
Scores
Overall: 3.5/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I like the colors and the contrast. I don't really like how the light overwhelms the lantern, slightly.
Composition:
There's a lot of nice contrast in this photo, and the color palette is very autumnal. I think it would be better with less exposure so that I could make out details regarding the lantern. I also think cropping it at the corner of the wall would make it better. I like how the lantern is positioned on a third.
Emotion:
It's dark and mysterious, and I keep expecting, like, Batman to appear in the dark area around the corner, for some reason. On the flip side, it also makes me think of how there's always hope, even in the darkest of nights.
About deviant:
JoGuge is studying photography in college. She's serious about portrait work with different kinds of film cameras. Any digital work she does is simple point-and-shoot, and "is more for helping [her] gather ideas and keep thinking in color."
Tip of The Day:
Sometimes it helps to just take pictures of things to help train your eye for those artistic things. It also helps to keep you thinking in color and about composition.
Wednesday, March 10, 2010
Orchid View 211 by Buildingclimber
Today's Critique brought to you by: buildingclimber.
Scores
Overall: 4.5/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I really like this photo. The colors are gorgeous, the depth of field if very nice, and a few other things just make it lovely to look at.
Composition:
I'd like to see more of the petal that's cut off at the bottom of the photo. The other flowers and buds in the picture are slightly distracting, but they add to the natural feel of the piece, so I'd say they're beneficial. The contrast between the flowers and the dark greens of the foliage is very nice and brings out the different shades of pink quite well. It might be a little noisy. I like the fact that the subject is in the center of the photo.
Emotion:
This photo reminds me of spring/summer time. It's a very good representation of life, and feels very natural.
About BuildingClimber:
Terry is a great photographer, as I'd expect from someone who's been a photographer since 1972 when he attended a vocational school for photography. He's a great guy and a wonderful photographer, though he sometimes finds it difficult to take photos due to a medical condition. "I believe that art is an act of creation and not just a recording of an event though I believe that too is creation because it is the photographers view which is created ..the camera is just the vehicle used to arrive at the finish line of that view," he says. I suggest you check his art out, as his gallery is really too good to pass up. His birthday is on March 10, he'll be 57.
Happy Birthday, Terry! May many more follow!
Tip of The Day:
Terry's right, art is an act of creation. That's why it's always best to try and get different or novel angle on your subject. For example, the kitten is much more interesting when you're photographing from it's level.
Tuesday, March 9, 2010
Piano by ThatPhotographyChick
Today's Critique brought to you by: ThatPhotographyChick
Scores
Overall: 3.5/5
Composition: 3/5
Emotion: 3.5/5
Overall:
I like the concept and the angle is very nice.
Composition:
I think there's some noise around the base of the keys (where the keys meet the piano?) and near the end of the (for lack of a better word) keyboard. I personally would have cropped it differently so that you couldn't see the end of the keyboard. I think black and white feel of the photo is a key component to the emotion of the piece. I'm quite fond of the contrast.
Emotion:
Whenever there's a photo in black and white (or even predominantly B&W) it always reminds me of the old days of photography. It has a very nice feel to it. This photo delights me, because it combines two of my loves - music and photography.
About ThatPhotographyChick:
She refused to supply me with a name other than her user name,* so I'm going to refer to ThatPhotographyChick as Chick henceforth, because I'm a lazy bum. Anyhow, she's a youngster, and judging by the ISO the photo was taken at (400) she knows a little bit more about the workings of a camera than I did until very recently. Chick's been into photography for about a year, and she likes taking pictures of people and nature, for the most part. She hasn't quite developed a keen eye for composition yet, but she's got a ton of promise and her gallery's worth looking at.
Tip of The Day:
If you have any nic-nacs lying about, those make great subjects for photography.
*I would have settled for Bob, even, but I'm glad she was being safe about the internet.
Monday, March 8, 2010
Spectrum by Mineek
Today's Critique brought to you by: Mineek
Scores
Overall: 3/5
Composition: 3/5
Emotion: 3/5
Overall:
I like the concept and the contrast.
Composition:
Well, the first thing I have to say is that nothing seems to be in focus. It also seems really noisy. I really like the colors, they're bright and contrast well with the hand. I like that you can see the lines of the hand.
Emotion:
It reminds me of rainbows,* which are always fun. makes me want to go play with my new gel pens. Translation: it makes me want to go be a little kind for a little while.
About deviant:
Mineek's been taking photos for about four years, mainly focusing on self-portraits. She's been known to use different styles every once in a while, though.
Tip of The Day:
When inside, your ISO should probably be around 800, unless the lighting is really good.
*Of course it reminds me of rainbows, it is one.
Sunday, March 7, 2010
Lavender 1 by Kiss
Today's Critique brought to you by: Kiss
Scores
Overall: 3/5
Composition: 3/5
Emotion: 3/5
Overall:
I like the color and the concept. The execution is a little off.
Composition:
Good use of the rule of thirds. The purple contrasts nicely with everything else in the photo. I think I'd like it better if the depth of field were wider, and the white stuff in the back ground is distracting, as is the bright green thing in the center of the background. The photo is noisy, too, so you should probably consider lowering your ISO next time. The focus itself is kind of nice.
Emotion:
This photo reminds me of springtime, and the beauty of life as it pushes through the snow to blossom.
About Kiss:
Li has been using a pocket camera for a few years, but she finally got her first "serious" camera this month. She like's up-close nature shots, such as plants, flowers and bugs, just to name a few. Her gallery is filled with a variety of artistic mediums.
Tip of The Day:
On a sunny Day, your ISO should probably be around 400 when you're outside.
Saturday, March 6, 2010
Golden Guardian by Idess
Today's Critique brought to you by: Idess
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 3.5/5
Overall:
For someone who doesn't claim to be a photographer, you certainly have a nice photo here. I really like how most things in the photo are arranged, and the colors are quite nice.
Composition:
I really like the majority of the picture. The bottom left ninth of the photo has a few distractions in it, and the people in front of the house are kind of distracting, too (though I wouldn't have noticed them if I weren't looking for them). The house if very clear, and has nice contrast. Nice placement of the house, too.
Emotion:
I like how the title lends a feeling of something being protected, presumably the bridge. The lack of clarity of the bridge (I assume it's the weather causing that) is interesting and makes it seem further away and bigger, which lends credence to the alternative that the house is being protected by the bridge.
About Idess:
Idess doesn't consider herself to be a photographer, because she just does it for fun, and I don't believe her in the least. She's very good at what she does, and her talents extend vastly beyond photography, in fact, I started watching her because she's an incredible artist. She takes her photos with an old Canon Powershot.
Tip of The Day:
Part of being a sane artist involves being an egoist while maintaining a healthy dose of the "OMG My Art Suxxors" attitude.*
*Which is why I'm not a sane artist, I have too much ego and not enough of a lack of confidence. I'm a sane person, though.
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 3.5/5
Overall:
For someone who doesn't claim to be a photographer, you certainly have a nice photo here. I really like how most things in the photo are arranged, and the colors are quite nice.
Composition:
I really like the majority of the picture. The bottom left ninth of the photo has a few distractions in it, and the people in front of the house are kind of distracting, too (though I wouldn't have noticed them if I weren't looking for them). The house if very clear, and has nice contrast. Nice placement of the house, too.
Emotion:
I like how the title lends a feeling of something being protected, presumably the bridge. The lack of clarity of the bridge (I assume it's the weather causing that) is interesting and makes it seem further away and bigger, which lends credence to the alternative that the house is being protected by the bridge.
About Idess:
Idess doesn't consider herself to be a photographer, because she just does it for fun, and I don't believe her in the least. She's very good at what she does, and her talents extend vastly beyond photography, in fact, I started watching her because she's an incredible artist. She takes her photos with an old Canon Powershot.
Tip of The Day:
Part of being a sane artist involves being an egoist while maintaining a healthy dose of the "OMG My Art Suxxors" attitude.*
*Which is why I'm not a sane artist, I have too much ego and not enough of a lack of confidence. I'm a sane person, though.
Friday, March 5, 2010
054 by MasochisticHeartache
Today's Critique brought to you by: MasochisticHeartache
Scores
Overall: 3.5/5
Composition: 3/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I really like the colors and the concept. there are a few compositional problems, nothing too serious.
Composition:
The jewelry doesn't really seem to be in focus. I like the leading lines of the notes leading up to the bracelet. I like the depth of field, but I think it would be better if the focus were better.
Emotion:
Well, for me this is a calm photo. It makes me think someone just got done with a concert and has unthinkingly placed their jewelry on their music because they're tired and just want to go to bed, or something along those lines.
About MasochisticHeartache:
She's an apprentice wedding photographer in Victoria. She's interested in photo journalism, and most of her photos have a journal feeling. She says they're "pictures of people's lives... so they mean something and aren't just a photo."
Tip of The Day:
Lens flare is difficult to get, but totally worth capturing.
Thursday, March 4, 2010
Not The Usual Suspects by Darwin2kx
Today's Critique brought to you by: Darwin2kx
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 3/5
Overall:
I like the colors and the depth of field. I can't really complain about much - it's a very nice and simple photo.
Composition:
Very nice contrast and depth of field. The colors are very nice, too. I'm somewhat distracted by the funny shaped purple one, and the black one in the very back.
Emotion:
Well I for one am against candy, but the colors and the idea of the candy certainly invoke a feeling of nostalgia. The title somewhat confuses me, but that's good, because it's making me think about why they're not the usual suspects.
About deviant:
Ben Dauphinee has been a photographer for seven years, which is basically since he picked up his first digital camera. He's been officially pro since he sold his first print in 2005. Ben got his first SLR last year (a Rebel XTi). Around 25% of his gallery is flowers. He has a personal website, Bendauphinee.com.
Tip of The Day:
Natural sunlight is a better light source than indoor lights, more often than not.
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 3/5
Overall:
I like the colors and the depth of field. I can't really complain about much - it's a very nice and simple photo.
Composition:
Very nice contrast and depth of field. The colors are very nice, too. I'm somewhat distracted by the funny shaped purple one, and the black one in the very back.
Emotion:
Well I for one am against candy, but the colors and the idea of the candy certainly invoke a feeling of nostalgia. The title somewhat confuses me, but that's good, because it's making me think about why they're not the usual suspects.
About deviant:
Ben Dauphinee has been a photographer for seven years, which is basically since he picked up his first digital camera. He's been officially pro since he sold his first print in 2005. Ben got his first SLR last year (a Rebel XTi). Around 25% of his gallery is flowers. He has a personal website, Bendauphinee.com.
Tip of The Day:
Natural sunlight is a better light source than indoor lights, more often than not.
Wednesday, March 3, 2010
Snow Bunting 1 by Rosie-A-G
Today's Critique brought to you by: Rosie-A-G
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I like the photo, because I know how hard it is to get bird shots. I also like how crisp the focus on the snow bunting is.
Composition:
I think the foreground is a little distracting, because the greens of the grass stand out more than the naturally muted colors of the bird. The focus if very nice, as is the depth of field. I like the contrast within the bird's feathers.
Emotion:
I'm in awe, because I know how hard it is to shoot birds. Also, birds are cute,so I'm kind of "b'aaww"ing.
About Rosie-A-G:
Rosie takes pictures of wildlife, mostly birds,as she's "been a birder all [her] life." She bought her first DSLR three years ago. She tries to hang out with photographers who are better than her, as she feels that a person learns a lot that way. Rosie'salso been taking quite a few courses specializing in wildlife photography.
Tip of The Day:
Hanging out with people who are better at photography than you is a great way to learn how to be better.
Tuesday, March 2, 2010
How To Fix Everything by Ohhey25
Today's Critique brought to you by: Ohhey25
Scores
Overall: 3.5/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I like the emotion present in this photo, as well as the interesting vignette. There are a few distractions.
Composition:
I like the contrast between her coat and the frame, and the frame and her face. I might have chosen a different coat for this shot, as the current one somewhat blends with the background near the bottom. I'd also like to see more of the frame and her elbow. I like the leading line of her finger pointing to her eyes. It's also a bit noisy around her eyes, I think.
Emotion:
She looks troubled. The slightly burnt effect of the vignette makes my mind wander down paths to find itself at a conclusion that her house burnt down and the frame is all she has left. Very nice emotion; good job.
About Ohhey25:
She started film photography in her junior and senior years of high school, which was five years ago. She didn't pick up photography again until last summer, and says she officially been into photography for eight months. Her favorite kinds of shots are portraits, particularly portraits that utilize they beauty of the subjects eyes. "They express a lot of emotion and are very beautiful," she says.
Tip of The Day:
While the stress of taking a digital photography class can sometimes drive you to madness, it's a very beneficial experience.
Monday, March 1, 2010
Quiet Earth II by Ymefreak
Today's Critique brought to you by: Ymefreak
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I really like this photo. This photo shows very nice contrast on more than one level. Just a few composition problems (ones I never would have noticed if I weren't looking for them).
Composition:
I think that the tree just barely showing itself on the left edge of the photo is distracting. You could help fix this by cropping differently, or including the whole tree next time. I'd also like to see David bigger, however I think that would change the overall feel of the piece. I mention contrast before, but I didn't go into detail. I love the stark contrast between the "city" (I say this because he's not dressed like a country boy) boy and the nature setting. There's also gorgeous contrast between the landscape and the sky.
Emotion:
This photo is peaceful. I could see someone going to the place in this photo to relax for an hour or two on the weekend, just to get away from it all.
About Ymefreak:
Madeline (the name her dA page gives me) has been doing photography for 3 years, which is right around when she joined deviantArt. She thinks her knowledge about the subject has improved quite a bit, but she also knows she's got a lot to learn. Her favorite kind of photography is portraiture. She also enjoys a nice landscape photo every once in a while. She wants to combined ultra-wide lens landscapes with portraiture someday, when she has the right equipment.
Tip of The Day:
Dogs that can't sit still make for bad photos.
Sunday, February 28, 2010
Aton by Samuilvel
Today's Critique brought to you by: Samuilvel
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
Even on my home PC, I could tell that this photo was a bit too dark. I like the contrast, and how enigmatic the photo is.
Composition:
By my reckoning, the photo is too dark. Then again, this adds to the contrast and over all feel of the photo, so it's not too bad. Past that, I can't find anything to complain about.
Emotion:
The darkness reminds me of a storm. The photo itself is enigmatic; I don't know what it's thinking (and trust me, photos do think). Judging by the focus, the white thing on the beach is important, and I wonder why.
About Samuilvel:
Samuil's been a member of the deviantArt community since August, 2008. Judging by his photography, he's no amateur. One of his works will be on exhibit for the "Picture of the year Bulgaria 2009" exhibition at the National Art Gallery in Sofia Bulgaria start March 4th.
Tip of The Day:
It doesn't matter how long you've been a photographer, there's still room for improvement.
Saturday, February 27, 2010
Macaw 2 by Aem-Creations
Today's Critique brought to you by: Aem-Creations
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I love how bright the colors are and how well they contrast with each other and the background,. The focus is very nice.
Composition:
I think I'd like to see either the rest of the parrot's left shoulder (is suppose it's actually his right shoulder) or the shoulder cropped out. Like I said before, nice contrast and focus. The exposure is nice, too.
Emotion:
The parrot kind of freaks me out, not because I'm scared of parrots (which I'm not), but because you've managed to capture his eye in a way that makes it seem like it follows you around the room.
About Aem-Creations:
Aem's been taking photos since they discovered their mom's 35mm point and shoiot camera at around age nine. In high school, they saved up for and bought their first "real" camera, a Canon Rebel. Aem tries to take pictures of whatever catches their eye, but they particularly enjoy shooting (not literally) animals.
Tip of The Day:
Some people have a stigma about cameras, saying that crappy-point-and-shoot cameras aren't "real" cameras. If they weren't real cameras, they wouldn't take pictures, now would they?
Friday, February 26, 2010
Lady Mary by TristanGreer
Today's Critique brought to you by: TristanGreer
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I like the colors and overall tone of the photo. There's nice contrast displayed in this photo, as well. I think there are a few small composition problems, but they're really not very significant, just some things to think about.
Composition:
The colors and contrast are really nice. The focus is gorgeous, too. I'd like to see a little more space between her elbow and the bottom of the photo. I also think that her eyes are leading the viewer off the photo, so it might be nice if her eyes were looking a little closer to the camera.
Emotion:
She looks like she's had a long day at work and just wants to sit down and have a drink without some guy haranguing her. Very nice.
About TristanGreer:
Tristan's been a photographer for around five years, but they're not a professional. They like genre shots, but they've been known to do glamor photos every once in a while.
Tip of The Day:
Sometimes it's just fun to draw things on your photos in PhotoShop, just because you can. The point here, is never to take photography too seriously, because once you lose the fun in it, you've lost everything.
Thursday, February 25, 2010
Candles by The-Apiphobic-Artist
Today's Critique brought to you by: The-Apiphobic-Artist
Scores
Overall: 3.5/5
Composition: 3/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I like the concept and the colors. There are a few distractions, though.
Composition:
I really like the contrast between the flames and the darkness of the photo, as well as the contrast between the white candle and the red candles. The big red candle in the background distracts me, as it seems to have no real purpose here, as does the object jutting into the right side of the picture. The photo is also kind of noisy. But, beyond that, it has good exposure.
Emotion:
My first thought upon seeing this, was something along the lines of "Aw, candles. 8D" (Yes, I do include emotes in my thoughts). After looking at it further, I noticed the huge mess this had the potential to become. One badly placed foot or cat could have red wax all over the place. And then I was amused by the thought of that very mess. Yeesh. I'm tired.
About The-Apiphobic-Artist:
TAA hasn't been a photogrpaher for very long, just a couple years (longer than I have, in truth). She's got a thing for pictures with interesting lighting, and takes lots of pictures where the sun "makes cool and different effects." She's planning uploading more stuff soon, so check her gallery out!
Tip of The Day:
If you're going to make a mess with your materials to take pictures of, be sure you clean it up afterward. Just because you have a mom, doesn't mean she should have to clean up after you.
Wednesday, February 24, 2010
Had Enough Of Those Young'ens by ShiverZPhotography
Today's Critique brought to you by: ShiverZPhotography
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I like the pose and the subject a lot. The title seems to fit this photo well, too.
Composition:
I love the angle. Technically speaking, the wolf doesn't stand out very much with the brown background, but I doubt there's very much you could have done about that. Um, the tree in the background is a bit distracting, and I probably would have cropped the photo differently.
Emotion:
The wolf really does like tired, and it kind of makes me want to go to sleep, too. The soft brown colors give this photo a natural autumn feeling, too.
About ShiverZPhotography:
Having been a photographer for seven or so year, Sophie's only really been serious about it for the past three. She's geared her photography around animals, and knows that getting the perfect shot often means taking hundreds, even thousands, of mediocre ones. Sophie generally sticks to natural photography, but has been known to cosplay/shoot cosplayers (not literally). She's branched out from nature, as well, and takes pictures of her travels. "My favourite animal subjects are tapirs, sloths, red pandas, leopards, wolves, giant anteaters, tamanduas and manatees," she says.* by the way, she has a youtube account, which I thought I'd include because I felt like it: Shiverz66.
I quote her here, because I'm too lazy to list those without the copy/paste feature of my PC. By the way, what's a tamandua?
Tip of The Day:
Always know your subject to the fullest of your extent. For example, Sophie knows her animals and I know my flowers.
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I like the pose and the subject a lot. The title seems to fit this photo well, too.
Composition:
I love the angle. Technically speaking, the wolf doesn't stand out very much with the brown background, but I doubt there's very much you could have done about that. Um, the tree in the background is a bit distracting, and I probably would have cropped the photo differently.
Emotion:
The wolf really does like tired, and it kind of makes me want to go to sleep, too. The soft brown colors give this photo a natural autumn feeling, too.
About ShiverZPhotography:
Having been a photographer for seven or so year, Sophie's only really been serious about it for the past three. She's geared her photography around animals, and knows that getting the perfect shot often means taking hundreds, even thousands, of mediocre ones. Sophie generally sticks to natural photography, but has been known to cosplay/shoot cosplayers (not literally). She's branched out from nature, as well, and takes pictures of her travels. "My favourite animal subjects are tapirs, sloths, red pandas, leopards, wolves, giant anteaters, tamanduas and manatees," she says.* by the way, she has a youtube account, which I thought I'd include because I felt like it: Shiverz66.
I quote her here, because I'm too lazy to list those without the copy/paste feature of my PC. By the way, what's a tamandua?
Tip of The Day:
Always know your subject to the fullest of your extent. For example, Sophie knows her animals and I know my flowers.
Tuesday, February 23, 2010
Don't look behind by Jeymo
Today's Critique brought to you by: Jeymo
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I like the contrast and the angle, too. The focus on the dog seems a bit off, like, it looks crisp, but my eye doesn't quite agree with that statement.
Composition:
Good use of the rule of thirds here. The contrast between the dog and the background and the collar and the dog is wonderful. The focus seems a tad off in some manner that I cannot describe. I mean, it's really nice focus, but there's just something about it.
Emotion:
The dog doesn't look too horribly happy about her position, which makes me wonder what she's unhappy about. At the same time, she looks curious, as though she's wondering what her owner is doing snapping a picture of her like this.
About Jeymo:
Jenny is German and she doesn't consider herself to be a photographer (I beg to differ). The dog is hers, and she's had her since she was a pup (no, I'm not going to clarify who had who since whom was a pup). Anyhow, Jenny dreams of being a photographer. She's been a member of deviantArt for 2 years, this may, and has an interesting assortment of art in her gallery.
Tip of The Day:
No matter how good you are at anything, there is always room for improvement.
Monday, February 22, 2010
Summer Days by Torikinns19
Today's Critique brought to you by: Torikinns19
Scores
Overall: 3/5
Composition: 3/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
This photo seems less artistic than it is just a snapshot of the world. I like the contrast and the lighting. This photo's weak point is composition.
Composition:
The cloud and the tree in the background are distracting. The colors are very nice. I'd like to see more focus on one specific sunflower than all four of them.
Emotion:
Sunflowers are happy flowers, giving this photo a feel of happiness. And the cloud looks so soft and close, it makes me feel like I'm laying on my back in a field, sort of. The sunflower without pedals is a grim reminder that darkness lurks within happiness.
About Torikinns19:
Victoria has always been into photography, and used to get in trouble regularly for absconding with her sister's camera to use it. She likes nature shots, with and without people, because she feels they're beautiful. The bright colors and movement of nature are what inspire her, and she loves that her photos seem to come to life. She's also fond of emotional photography. "There is beauty in this world and it is all around us, I try my best to capture it and share with the world," she says.
Tip of The Day:
If you want to get a good smile out of your model, it's best to make them laugh.
Scores
Overall: 3/5
Composition: 3/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
This photo seems less artistic than it is just a snapshot of the world. I like the contrast and the lighting. This photo's weak point is composition.
Composition:
The cloud and the tree in the background are distracting. The colors are very nice. I'd like to see more focus on one specific sunflower than all four of them.
Emotion:
Sunflowers are happy flowers, giving this photo a feel of happiness. And the cloud looks so soft and close, it makes me feel like I'm laying on my back in a field, sort of. The sunflower without pedals is a grim reminder that darkness lurks within happiness.
About Torikinns19:
Victoria has always been into photography, and used to get in trouble regularly for absconding with her sister's camera to use it. She likes nature shots, with and without people, because she feels they're beautiful. The bright colors and movement of nature are what inspire her, and she loves that her photos seem to come to life. She's also fond of emotional photography. "There is beauty in this world and it is all around us, I try my best to capture it and share with the world," she says.
Tip of The Day:
If you want to get a good smile out of your model, it's best to make them laugh.
Sunday, February 21, 2010
Llevo Tus Plantas by Skuhweer
Today's Critique brought to you by: Skuhweer
Scores
Overall: 3.5/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
What I like about this photo is the vibrant green and the clarity of the water droplet. I think the green of the background makes it kind of heavy, though.
Composition:
I'm not a proponent of the rule of thirds, so I'm perfectly fine with where you've placed the subject. I'd like to see more contrast, though.
Emotion:
The vibrancy of the green speaks of life and nature; the water droplet gives me an over all sense of peace.
About Skuhweer:
Skuhweer has been a photographer for a year and half, now. Her favorite shots are shots that look somewhat vintage like. She believes photography is all about telling the truth in a fantastical way. Skuhweer really admires people who are confident enough to use film cameras.
Tip of The Day:
Train yourself to be your best critic. Intrinsically, artists are hard on themselves, so give yourself a little leeway, but not too much.
Scores
Overall: 3.5/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
What I like about this photo is the vibrant green and the clarity of the water droplet. I think the green of the background makes it kind of heavy, though.
Composition:
I'm not a proponent of the rule of thirds, so I'm perfectly fine with where you've placed the subject. I'd like to see more contrast, though.
Emotion:
The vibrancy of the green speaks of life and nature; the water droplet gives me an over all sense of peace.
About Skuhweer:
Skuhweer has been a photographer for a year and half, now. Her favorite shots are shots that look somewhat vintage like. She believes photography is all about telling the truth in a fantastical way. Skuhweer really admires people who are confident enough to use film cameras.
Tip of The Day:
Train yourself to be your best critic. Intrinsically, artists are hard on themselves, so give yourself a little leeway, but not too much.
Saturday, February 20, 2010
Maurice by Bwolkenhauer
Today's Critique brought to you by: Bwolkenhauer
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I like the colors and the exposure. The left side feels a little heavy. The focus is nice.
Composition:
The rocks on the left half of the photo make it feel a little lopsided. The colors and contrast or gorgeous, and the exposure is very nice. Your ISO is low, as it should be.
Emotion:
This photo reminds me of summers and farewells. Of standing on the beach watching the sun go down and watching my sandcastle erode with the waves.
About Bwolkenhauer:
Brooke has been an avid photographer since she got her camera last year. She's been taking picture of anything that catches her eye ever since, but she really enjoys colorful photos. She likes contrast, as well. While she's no expert (her words, not mine), she is quite talented; go check her out.
Tip of The Day:
Contrast is a powerful artistic tool. Use it well and you could rule the world.
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I like the colors and the exposure. The left side feels a little heavy. The focus is nice.
Composition:
The rocks on the left half of the photo make it feel a little lopsided. The colors and contrast or gorgeous, and the exposure is very nice. Your ISO is low, as it should be.
Emotion:
This photo reminds me of summers and farewells. Of standing on the beach watching the sun go down and watching my sandcastle erode with the waves.
About Bwolkenhauer:
Brooke has been an avid photographer since she got her camera last year. She's been taking picture of anything that catches her eye ever since, but she really enjoys colorful photos. She likes contrast, as well. While she's no expert (her words, not mine), she is quite talented; go check her out.
Tip of The Day:
Contrast is a powerful artistic tool. Use it well and you could rule the world.
Friday, February 19, 2010
Hearts in Eyes by BananaFiishBones
Today's Critique brought to you by: BananaFiishPones
Scores
Overall: 3.5/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I like the colors and overall tone of the piece. Nice contrast. There are just a few things I'd change, were I the photographer.
Composition:
The focus is very nice. I like the colors, and the contrast between the sunglasses and her face. I'd like to see more of her face, and the rest of her glasses.
Emotion:
This photo seems mysterious. It makes me wonder what the model is thinking about. The lighting is soft, lending a benevolent feel to the over all composition.
About BananaFiishBones:
Banana (as I'm going to refer to her) is French. She's been interested in photography for 3 years, but she doesn't consider herself a photographer. She prefers candid photography. Banana uses a Canon 1000D, which she worked very hard to earn.
Tip of The Day:
Victory has never tasted as sweet as it does on the day that you receive your first DSLR.
Thursday, February 18, 2010
Headphones by Jennieaedunlap
Today's Critique brought to you by: jennieaedunlap.
Scores
Overall: 3.5/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion:4/5
Overall:
I like the concept and the background. The lighting is a little off, and I'd like to see a few things about the composition changed. The focus is nice.
Composition:
I'd like to see a little more space between the headphone in the background and the top of the photo. The photo also seems a little dark. There's a lot of noise. I like the over all tone of the photo.
Emotion: This photo reminds me of all those times that I've gotten up and left one of my books in the middle of a study session. T he headphones seem sort of forlorn when I think about it like that.
About Jennieaedunlap:
Jennieae has been a photographer for two to three years now. She's not professional, she just does photography for fun. She likes taking abstract and expressive photos.
Tip of The Day:
Listening to music while you work can often improve your creative capabilities.
Wednesday, February 17, 2010
Dafo.Dill. by KristieCalifornia
Today's Critique brought to you by: KristieCalifornia
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall:
I like the colors - they're very bright. It seems dark, which is probably due to the monitor of the PC I'm using at the moment. There are a few composition things I'd change, but it's still a nice photo.
Composition:
I'd like to see more space between the daffodil and the top of the photo. While I like the angle, I think the photo would be better from a different one. The focus is very nice, and the flower is not washed out or too dark.
Emotion: It reminds me of Spring, which is a great time of the year. The yellow makes me kind of happy, too. The daffodil, like all daffodils (really), looks somewhat forlorn.
About KristieCalifornia:
She's always liked taking pictures, but it wasn't until a year or two ago that she started to notice how much she actually liked it. Kristie started learning how to mess with lighting and stuff like that. She likes to take shots of flowers and random objects that have detail or distinct texture.
Tip of The Day:
Noise is your enemy - except when it isn't. Use noise removal software - Paint.Net comes with it - to remove it when you can!
Tuesday, February 16, 2010
Bouquet2 by EternalMessage
Today's Critique brought to you by: EternalMessage
Scores
Overall: 3.5/5
Composition:3/5
Emotion:4/5
Overall:
The colors are great, it's really noisy, but when it's zoomed out, I think that adds character - it's distracting on full view, though. There are a few composition problems, too.
Composition:
I personally would have cropped the photo differently. The pink rose that's cut out kind of bothers me, because I'd like to see the whole thing. I don't know if it's just the settings of the monitor of the computer I'm using, but the photo also seems really dark.
Emotion:
The graininess of the photo gives it a nostalgic feel. It's seems quite elegant, too.
About EternalMessage:
EternalMessage (EM) has been a photographer for about a year and a half. They like to shoot plants and landscapes, because those shots show real life. EM's favorite kinds of shot are still life and macro. EM really likes photography, because it allows for creative expression in different ways. Their inspiration is natural beauty the things going on around them.
Tip of The Day:
You don't need to spend a ton of money on programs like PhotoShop to edit your photos. There are several free programs avalable online, such as Paint.Net (Available here.), that are just as effective.
Monday, February 15, 2010
Cedric and The Stone by KomradeKomer
Today's Critique brought to you by: KomradeKomer
Scores
Overall: 4/5 (+52 for Gnomage)
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall: I like Cedric. In addition to the awesome subject, I also like the colors. There are a few distractions.
Composition: I like how Cedric contrasts with the rest of the photo; everything else is a somewhat subdued color, while he's brightly colored. The lamp behind him is a little distracting; I would have had Cedric closer to left side of the photo, myself. The lighting is a little dark for my tastes.
Emotion: Beyond the glee of seeing a gnome, I feel curiosity as to why Cedric is on the stone, but that's good. This photo, and the other photos featuring Cedric, reminds me of the Travelocity Gnome, whom I love.
About KomeradeKomer:
He picked up an ex-professional camera that still uses film. He's been shooting with it for a year now. He's still learning, and he has some great photos. Currently he's working with portraits, but he prefers landscapes/cityscapes.
Tip of The Day:
Photography doesn't have to be a career. At the same time, you should never do something you're good at for free.
Sunday, February 14, 2010
Camargue by PrisleyStan
Today's Critique brought to you by: PrisleyStan
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall: I really like the colors. The focus is nice, as well. I'm not too fond of the placement of the subject in relation to the background.
Composition: The colors contrast quite nicely with the silhouette. I'm digging the depth of field, because the grass is in focus and the background isn't. I don't like the clump of trees directly beside the grass; it feels like they're crowding it.
Emotion: Summer; that's what this photo reminds me of. Makes me think of a warm summer's night spent swimming in or sitting by a lake.
About PriselyStan:
Priscilla likes to capture moments, moods, light and colors. She more use dot landscapes, but she's been trying to work people into her work. Her gallery doesn't have a real coherence to it, because she's still trying to find her own style, but she's skilled nonetheless.
Tip of The Day:
There are an infinite number of things to photograph in your surroundings. Great photography does not require traveling. It's all about finding a new way to look at old things, ya digg?
Saturday, February 13, 2010
Clifftop Castle by Icandealwithfate
Today's Critique brought to you by: Icandealwithfate
Scores
Overall: 3.5/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 3.5/5
Overall: I like how crisp the lines of the grass are, and how the grass contrasts with the sky and the hill in the background. The angle's nice, was well. It seems kind of subjectless, but that's because my mind process grass as a background object, so it's probably fine.
Composition: Everything's crisp and clean, too. There's aren't really that many distractions - the big green hill/castle in the background is the only one I can see (and I think it adds to the picture). I'd rather it were focused on the castle, myself, but I like it this way, too. I don't really like the blurred grass in the foreground.
Emotion: This photo kind of makes me think of cresting a hill on the other side of which is a valley. On the other side of this valley, is a castle. Anyway, it's a feeling of weariness and euphoria at knowing that my destination is near at hand.
About Icandealwithfate:
Rain's been a photographer for about eight years, and she recently bought herself a Canon EOS Rebel XS (the same kind of camera I bought, recently) for her trip of the year. From what I gather, she's currently living in august until June. She was influenced to start photography young by her uncle.
Tip of The Day: Stalking people with your camera is fun.
Friday, February 12, 2010
Her Old Shoes by Viatrierci
Today's Critique brought to you by: Viatrierci
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall: This piece shows great contrast and leading lines. I love the model's pose, too. I'm not sure I like the trees in relation to Eun, though.
Composition: The model contrasts very nicely with the sky. However, I think there's a lot of green in the photo as a whole. The way Eun looks at her shoes/fan is great, because it draws my eyes directly to the subject of the title - her shoes.I really like the variety of textures present in this shot, and the lighting is very nice. The tree line behind her is probably the only part I don't like, and that's because I think her outfit would contrast much better with clear blue sky. I also really like the fact that she's barefoot.
Emotion: Green is a lively color; this photo is full of life. I like the way she's looking at her shoes - it reminds me of seeing an old friend after a long while or reminiscing about the good old days. There's also a subtle hint of freedom shown by how she's barefoot..
About Viatrierci:
She's does photogrpahy as a hobby and, like all of us, she's not always very enthusiastic about it. She got her first DSLR last year (January 9, 2009). She used to be into landscapes, but limited travel experiences have caused her to move on to other things, such as fashion and avante garde. She wants to do underwater photography, but the equipment is expensive, so she's content to stick with above-water photography, for now. Viatrierci's gallery is quite diverse, and is definitely worth pawing through.
Tip of The Day:
Flowers are a great way to improve your skills, because they're better at sitting still than many other things.
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall: This piece shows great contrast and leading lines. I love the model's pose, too. I'm not sure I like the trees in relation to Eun, though.
Composition: The model contrasts very nicely with the sky. However, I think there's a lot of green in the photo as a whole. The way Eun looks at her shoes/fan is great, because it draws my eyes directly to the subject of the title - her shoes.I really like the variety of textures present in this shot, and the lighting is very nice. The tree line behind her is probably the only part I don't like, and that's because I think her outfit would contrast much better with clear blue sky. I also really like the fact that she's barefoot.
Emotion: Green is a lively color; this photo is full of life. I like the way she's looking at her shoes - it reminds me of seeing an old friend after a long while or reminiscing about the good old days. There's also a subtle hint of freedom shown by how she's barefoot..
About Viatrierci:
She's does photogrpahy as a hobby and, like all of us, she's not always very enthusiastic about it. She got her first DSLR last year (January 9, 2009). She used to be into landscapes, but limited travel experiences have caused her to move on to other things, such as fashion and avante garde. She wants to do underwater photography, but the equipment is expensive, so she's content to stick with above-water photography, for now. Viatrierci's gallery is quite diverse, and is definitely worth pawing through.
Tip of The Day:
Flowers are a great way to improve your skills, because they're better at sitting still than many other things.
Thursday, February 11, 2010
Sorry III by Matias15
Today's critique is brought to you by: Matias15
Scores:
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall: I like the emotion and the pose quite a bit. The light might be a little harsh. The photo is a little noisy, too.
Composition: I really like the pose. It's almost like she just woke up from a nap or something. As previously stated, the light might be a little on the harsh side and the photo is noisy. I think going with B&W was a great choice for this shot.
Emotion: She seems kind of tired, like she just woke up. the is mostly her pose and the lighting. It also has a bit of an old-fashioned feel, because of being in greyscale, which contrasts quite nicely with her outfit.
About Matias15:
Matias started out in 2005 with a Sony H2. Eventually he upgraded to a Nikon D60, then a D80 (his current camera). He's a professional. Anyhow, his favorite shots are shots with people in them, and concert photography. Matias' gallery is full of awesome, and I suggest you check it out.
Tip of the Day:
Never be afraid to show off your work. Often enough you are your own worst critic,* and there will always be someone who enjoys seeing what you've come up with.
*Unless you've got an ego, like I do, then you're just good at critiquing your own work.
Scores:
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall: I like the emotion and the pose quite a bit. The light might be a little harsh. The photo is a little noisy, too.
Composition: I really like the pose. It's almost like she just woke up from a nap or something. As previously stated, the light might be a little on the harsh side and the photo is noisy. I think going with B&W was a great choice for this shot.
Emotion: She seems kind of tired, like she just woke up. the is mostly her pose and the lighting. It also has a bit of an old-fashioned feel, because of being in greyscale, which contrasts quite nicely with her outfit.
About Matias15:
Matias started out in 2005 with a Sony H2. Eventually he upgraded to a Nikon D60, then a D80 (his current camera). He's a professional. Anyhow, his favorite shots are shots with people in them, and concert photography. Matias' gallery is full of awesome, and I suggest you check it out.
Tip of the Day:
Never be afraid to show off your work. Often enough you are your own worst critic,* and there will always be someone who enjoys seeing what you've come up with.
*Unless you've got an ego, like I do, then you're just good at critiquing your own work.
Wednesday, February 10, 2010
Arches by EGibson-Photography
Today's critique brought to you by: Egibson-Photography.
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition:4/5
Emotion:4/5
Overall: I like the angle, but I feel that the positioning is a little off. I think black and white was a good choice for this photo, too.
Composition: I would like to see more of the lamp that's in the foreground, and the dark area on the right side is a bit of a distraction. I'd also like to see a little more space between the edge of the photo and the vanishing point. I really like the lighting and the contrast shown in this piece. The lower half contrasts quite nicely with the upper half.
Emotion: Being black and white, this photo gets a feeling that is somewhat old-timey. The angle makes it look like the distance is far, and thusly makes me think that it's going to be a long walk to get to that third lamp.
About EGibson-Photography:
Emili has been doig photography professionally for around 2 years, however, she's been a photographer for six years. She loves people photos, and feels that "clearly captures an emotion has merit." She has a tendency to prefer editorial shots. Her gallery is pretty awesome, especially since it's only a week old, and is definitely worth strolling through.
Tip of The Day:
The line between a hobbyist and a professional is a defined by whether you make money at it. However, above all else, you should take photos for yourself, because that's the way to create art. Tape a chunk of your soul to the photo - trust me, souls regenerate over time.
Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition:4/5
Emotion:4/5
Overall: I like the angle, but I feel that the positioning is a little off. I think black and white was a good choice for this photo, too.
Composition: I would like to see more of the lamp that's in the foreground, and the dark area on the right side is a bit of a distraction. I'd also like to see a little more space between the edge of the photo and the vanishing point. I really like the lighting and the contrast shown in this piece. The lower half contrasts quite nicely with the upper half.
Emotion: Being black and white, this photo gets a feeling that is somewhat old-timey. The angle makes it look like the distance is far, and thusly makes me think that it's going to be a long walk to get to that third lamp.
About EGibson-Photography:
Emili has been doig photography professionally for around 2 years, however, she's been a photographer for six years. She loves people photos, and feels that "clearly captures an emotion has merit." She has a tendency to prefer editorial shots. Her gallery is pretty awesome, especially since it's only a week old, and is definitely worth strolling through.
Tip of The Day:
The line between a hobbyist and a professional is a defined by whether you make money at it. However, above all else, you should take photos for yourself, because that's the way to create art. Tape a chunk of your soul to the photo - trust me, souls regenerate over time.
Tuesday, February 9, 2010
Purple Petunia 1 by Midnight-cardinal
Today's critique brought to you by: Midnight-Cardinal
Scores:
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall: I like the bright colors and the depth of field. I don't like the red in the background, though.
Composition: I love the depth of field and the placement of the petunia. The light and dark purples contrast well with each other, as well as contrasting nicely with the rest of the picture. The red plant in the background is somewhat distracting.
Emotion: This reminds me of summer, flowers always do. It has nostalgia value, for me, because flowers are practically all I used to take pictures of, and some of my best pictures have been of flowers. I think beyond that, it could use some improvement in this category.
A bit about Midnight-Cardinal:
Rayna has only really been photography since last November. Luckily it's summer in New Zealand, so she has lots of time to practice and plenty of things to photograph, too. She's currently focusing on landscapes andnature, but she hopes to do chapter/story photography someday. She's got a great eye for interesting angles, and her gallery is very nice.
Tip of The Day:
If you find someone who takes photos that you really like, try to incorporate some of what they do into your work. It helps to create a style that is all your own, a style that fits your personality. This actually goes for all mediums.
Scores:
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall: I like the bright colors and the depth of field. I don't like the red in the background, though.
Composition: I love the depth of field and the placement of the petunia. The light and dark purples contrast well with each other, as well as contrasting nicely with the rest of the picture. The red plant in the background is somewhat distracting.
Emotion: This reminds me of summer, flowers always do. It has nostalgia value, for me, because flowers are practically all I used to take pictures of, and some of my best pictures have been of flowers. I think beyond that, it could use some improvement in this category.
A bit about Midnight-Cardinal:
Rayna has only really been photography since last November. Luckily it's summer in New Zealand, so she has lots of time to practice and plenty of things to photograph, too. She's currently focusing on landscapes andnature, but she hopes to do chapter/story photography someday. She's got a great eye for interesting angles, and her gallery is very nice.
Tip of The Day:
If you find someone who takes photos that you really like, try to incorporate some of what they do into your work. It helps to create a style that is all your own, a style that fits your personality. This actually goes for all mediums.
Monday, February 8, 2010
Waiting For You To Come Home by Cloudbubb
Today's critique brought yo you by Cloudbubb.
Scores:
Overall: 3/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall: I like the emotion that this photo conveys. However, I think the light is too harsh and distracting.
Composition: I like that the cat is in the center and that the light is coming from behind it. I think the drawers on the left and the light coming from the window/doorway are distracting. I like the contrast.
Emotion: The way the lighting is on the cat gives the viewer a sense of mystery. Who is this cat, and why is it waiting for me? The location somewhat detracts from this feeling, but it's not too horrible.
About Cloudbubb:
Alex has been taking photos for about a year. Her favorite kind of photography is candid photography, because it makes the person seem more natural. She's got a pretty good gallery, and it's certainly worth looking at.
Tip of The Day:
Always wear the strap for your camera, this helps keep it from getting broken.
Scores:
Overall: 3/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall: I like the emotion that this photo conveys. However, I think the light is too harsh and distracting.
Composition: I like that the cat is in the center and that the light is coming from behind it. I think the drawers on the left and the light coming from the window/doorway are distracting. I like the contrast.
Emotion: The way the lighting is on the cat gives the viewer a sense of mystery. Who is this cat, and why is it waiting for me? The location somewhat detracts from this feeling, but it's not too horrible.
About Cloudbubb:
Alex has been taking photos for about a year. Her favorite kind of photography is candid photography, because it makes the person seem more natural. She's got a pretty good gallery, and it's certainly worth looking at.
Tip of The Day:
Always wear the strap for your camera, this helps keep it from getting broken.
Sunday, February 7, 2010
White Delight by Photospaz
Today's critique brought to you by: Photospaz.
Scores:
Overall: 4.5/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall: I really like the simplicity of this photo. It shows great texture and pattern, too. I'm not particularly fond of the placement of the snowflake within the photo, but it's not too bad.
Composition: I think I'd like to see the area that's in focus moved back so that all of the snowflake is in focus, rather than just part of it. Also, the snowflake is kind of hanging out in an odd place for photos. I like the contrast between the snowflake and the background, though.
Emotion: This photo reminds me of winter, as it should, and of year spent playing in the snow, throwing the snow about, and so on - meaning it has nostalgic value. It also give me a sense of urgency, because I feel like it'll melt away at any moment.
About Photospaz:
Alyssa has been a photographer for about two years, which is when she got her first digital camera, I assume. Then she discovered the macro button, and she was hooked. "Macro is my life now," she says. She adores macro and landscape photos, as well as photos of animals and buildings. She also enjoys photo editing, though she says she's not very good at it.*
*Neither am I, for that matter.
Tip of the day:
Photography is all about taking ordinary things and making them extraordinary. From one angle, a cat is simple that, a cat. For a different angle, however, the cat becomes Catzilla, or, at the very least, a more emotional subject.
Scores:
Overall: 4.5/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Overall: I really like the simplicity of this photo. It shows great texture and pattern, too. I'm not particularly fond of the placement of the snowflake within the photo, but it's not too bad.
Composition: I think I'd like to see the area that's in focus moved back so that all of the snowflake is in focus, rather than just part of it. Also, the snowflake is kind of hanging out in an odd place for photos. I like the contrast between the snowflake and the background, though.
Emotion: This photo reminds me of winter, as it should, and of year spent playing in the snow, throwing the snow about, and so on - meaning it has nostalgic value. It also give me a sense of urgency, because I feel like it'll melt away at any moment.
About Photospaz:
Alyssa has been a photographer for about two years, which is when she got her first digital camera, I assume. Then she discovered the macro button, and she was hooked. "Macro is my life now," she says. She adores macro and landscape photos, as well as photos of animals and buildings. She also enjoys photo editing, though she says she's not very good at it.*
*Neither am I, for that matter.
Tip of the day:
Photography is all about taking ordinary things and making them extraordinary. From one angle, a cat is simple that, a cat. For a different angle, however, the cat becomes Catzilla, or, at the very least, a more emotional subject.
Saturday, February 6, 2010
Point of Land by Perfectionisyou
Official Announcement Regarding the Blog: Because Innovation doesn't seem particularly useful, I'm removing it from the critiquing terms unless someone specifically asks me to critique for it.
Today's critique is brought to you by: Perfectionisyou.
Scores:
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 3/5
Overall: I like this photo because of the angle. The bright white of the lighthouse draws the eye to it, which is very good. I'm not too fond of the otherwise subdued colors.
Composition: The placement of the light house is very nice, as are the rocks in the foreground. The people aren't too bad of a distraction. The leading lines of the rocks make my eyes venture off the photo, though.
Emotion: The subdued colors the photo remind me of the small number of cloudy days I've spent at the beach. The photo also conveys a sense of being separated from others.
About Perfectionisyou:
Lex does photography for a hobby, mostly because her school doesn't offer a digital photography class. She's been a photographer for around six years. Since she got her own camera, she's been taking more pictures. She likes pictures that have water in them, because of how water reflections things and how easily water expresses emotion.
Tip of the day:
Don't be afraid to get dirty for your photography. Some of the best shots ever have been obtained at the expense of muddy knees and grass stains. Just try to keep your camera clean and dry.
Today's critique is brought to you by: Perfectionisyou.
Scores:
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 3/5
Overall: I like this photo because of the angle. The bright white of the lighthouse draws the eye to it, which is very good. I'm not too fond of the otherwise subdued colors.
Composition: The placement of the light house is very nice, as are the rocks in the foreground. The people aren't too bad of a distraction. The leading lines of the rocks make my eyes venture off the photo, though.
Emotion: The subdued colors the photo remind me of the small number of cloudy days I've spent at the beach. The photo also conveys a sense of being separated from others.
About Perfectionisyou:
Lex does photography for a hobby, mostly because her school doesn't offer a digital photography class. She's been a photographer for around six years. Since she got her own camera, she's been taking more pictures. She likes pictures that have water in them, because of how water reflections things and how easily water expresses emotion.
Tip of the day:
Don't be afraid to get dirty for your photography. Some of the best shots ever have been obtained at the expense of muddy knees and grass stains. Just try to keep your camera clean and dry.
Friday, February 5, 2010
Peacock Droplet by Dirzha
Today's critique is brought to you by Dirzha.
Scores:
Overall: 4.5/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 3.5/5
Innovation: 4/5
Overall: I really like the colors and the depth of field of this piece. It seems to lack emotion, just a little, but, then, I'm not feeling well today, so maybe I'm just missing it.
Composition: The colors and the depth of field are gorgeous. The water droplet is so crisp, too. I think, maybe, I'd increase the depth of field a little so that a tiny bit of the area in front of the droplet is in focus, too.
Emotion: There isn't a whole lot of emotion immediately obvious in this photo. It make me want to stare at it, though, which is a plus, because it captivates the part of me that enjoys art.
Innovation: I find it amusing that as soon as I sat down to prepare to critique this, a similar photo showed up in my inbox. However, before that, I'd never seen anything like it. Very nice.
About Dirzha:
Dirzha's been a photographer for something like ten years now. However, she started with digital photography two years ago. In a way, the two mediums are vastly different, but, for the most part, they're quite similar. Macro isn't normally something she does, and this photo is one of her first real "macro" shots.
Tip of the day:
A narrow depth of field can eliminate distractions in the background of your photos. At the same time, it can sometimes make things blurry without your permission. Anyhow, try it out if you can.
Scores:
Overall: 4.5/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 3.5/5
Innovation: 4/5
Overall: I really like the colors and the depth of field of this piece. It seems to lack emotion, just a little, but, then, I'm not feeling well today, so maybe I'm just missing it.
Composition: The colors and the depth of field are gorgeous. The water droplet is so crisp, too. I think, maybe, I'd increase the depth of field a little so that a tiny bit of the area in front of the droplet is in focus, too.
Emotion: There isn't a whole lot of emotion immediately obvious in this photo. It make me want to stare at it, though, which is a plus, because it captivates the part of me that enjoys art.
Innovation: I find it amusing that as soon as I sat down to prepare to critique this, a similar photo showed up in my inbox. However, before that, I'd never seen anything like it. Very nice.
About Dirzha:
Dirzha's been a photographer for something like ten years now. However, she started with digital photography two years ago. In a way, the two mediums are vastly different, but, for the most part, they're quite similar. Macro isn't normally something she does, and this photo is one of her first real "macro" shots.
Tip of the day:
A narrow depth of field can eliminate distractions in the background of your photos. At the same time, it can sometimes make things blurry without your permission. Anyhow, try it out if you can.
Thursday, February 4, 2010
Surrounded by Craukette
Today's critique is brought to you by: Craukette
Scores:
Overall: 4.5/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Innovation: 4/5
Overall: I really like this photo. The colors are gorgeous and the reflection of the sky on the skyscraper is quite nice.
Composition: I like that there are, like, three main building crowding the center. the sky is in the center, which I, personally, like. I think I'd like it better if the spires at the bottom weren't there, but, at the same time, they contribute to the overall mood of the piece.
Emotion: This photo makes me feel kind of claustrophobic. The building are towering over the viewer, but not in a bad way. It's like the bigger kids who want to welcome the small kid to school. And the sky is so bright, too.
Innovation: I really think the fact that the clouds are so bright above the buildings is great. The angle is great and stuff, too.
A little bit about Craukette:
Craukette has been doing photography for at least five years. She got her first "Real" camera (a Nikon D70) five years ago to take pictures in New Zealand. Her favorite kinds of photos are landscapes and sky photos, and anything that kind of transcribes harmony. She recently got a new camera.
Tip of the day: Try photoshopping two heads on one body. It's amusing.
Scores:
Overall: 4.5/5
Composition: 4/5
Emotion: 4/5
Innovation: 4/5
Overall: I really like this photo. The colors are gorgeous and the reflection of the sky on the skyscraper is quite nice.
Composition: I like that there are, like, three main building crowding the center. the sky is in the center, which I, personally, like. I think I'd like it better if the spires at the bottom weren't there, but, at the same time, they contribute to the overall mood of the piece.
Emotion: This photo makes me feel kind of claustrophobic. The building are towering over the viewer, but not in a bad way. It's like the bigger kids who want to welcome the small kid to school. And the sky is so bright, too.
Innovation: I really think the fact that the clouds are so bright above the buildings is great. The angle is great and stuff, too.
A little bit about Craukette:
Craukette has been doing photography for at least five years. She got her first "Real" camera (a Nikon D70) five years ago to take pictures in New Zealand. Her favorite kinds of photos are landscapes and sky photos, and anything that kind of transcribes harmony. She recently got a new camera.
Tip of the day: Try photoshopping two heads on one body. It's amusing.
Wednesday, February 3, 2010
Peaceful by Natalyy
Todays critique is brought to you by Natalyy.
Scores:
Overall: 3/5
Composition: 3/5
Emotion: 4/5
Innovation: 3/5
Overall: It's a very beautiful photo. I'm not entirely fond of these kinds of pictures, but that's not your fault. Still, very pretty.
Composition: I personally would have cropped it differently. The cloud at the very top is a little distracting, to me. I really like the position of the sun and the clouds surrounding it, though. And the colors are beautiful.
Emotion: Like the title implies, this photo gives off a peaceful feel. The darker clouds at the top make me feel like the peace isn't going to last long. However, the bright yellows and light blues also make me feel that the darkness can be held at bay.
Innovation: I see these kinds of photos all the time - which is part of why I'm not particularly fond of them as a whole. Anyhow, I feel that this one would have been more unique if it had been cropped differently. Still, the photo is quite beautiful, and unique in its own way - two sunsets are never the same.
About Natalyy:
Natalyy enjoys taking macro shots, but she's recently gotten into taking conceptual shots, as well. She's been on dA for two years, and, from the looks of it, she started doing photography way before then. dA says she's eighteen and from "Bosnia and Herzegovina." Her gallery is a amazing, so check it out.
Tip of the day:
Cats - we all love to take photos of them (except for those who don't). The problem with them is that they don't like to sit still most of the time - or follow the script. How can you fix this? You can't. You have to rely on luck. However, having someone distract the cat in your preferred direction helps.
Scores:
Overall: 3/5
Composition: 3/5
Emotion: 4/5
Innovation: 3/5
Overall: It's a very beautiful photo. I'm not entirely fond of these kinds of pictures, but that's not your fault. Still, very pretty.
Composition: I personally would have cropped it differently. The cloud at the very top is a little distracting, to me. I really like the position of the sun and the clouds surrounding it, though. And the colors are beautiful.
Emotion: Like the title implies, this photo gives off a peaceful feel. The darker clouds at the top make me feel like the peace isn't going to last long. However, the bright yellows and light blues also make me feel that the darkness can be held at bay.
Innovation: I see these kinds of photos all the time - which is part of why I'm not particularly fond of them as a whole. Anyhow, I feel that this one would have been more unique if it had been cropped differently. Still, the photo is quite beautiful, and unique in its own way - two sunsets are never the same.
About Natalyy:
Natalyy enjoys taking macro shots, but she's recently gotten into taking conceptual shots, as well. She's been on dA for two years, and, from the looks of it, she started doing photography way before then. dA says she's eighteen and from "Bosnia and Herzegovina." Her gallery is a amazing, so check it out.
Tip of the day:
Cats - we all love to take photos of them (except for those who don't). The problem with them is that they don't like to sit still most of the time - or follow the script. How can you fix this? You can't. You have to rely on luck. However, having someone distract the cat in your preferred direction helps.
Tuesday, February 2, 2010
Ich blicke an dir vorbei by Chinographer
Today's critique brought to you by: Chinographer.
Scores:
Overall: 4/5
Composition:3.5/5
Emotion:3.5/5
Innovation: 4/5
Overall: I'm really digging this photo. I love the angle of the building, and the hue of the sky.
Composition: I don't really like the lamp or the shadows on the building - they're slightly distracting - but the rest of this piece is very strong. If this were an add for a hotel, I could totally see the text being right where all the leading lines point.
Emotion: This photo gives me the same feeling that all the really big buildings in New York City - a kind of claustrophobic awe. The building looms very well. And I guess it wouldn't loom quite as well without the lamp post to give us perspective.
Innovation: I don't get to take/see pictures like this very often, because I live in a small town. I think the angle is very creative.
About Chinographer:
This guy's been doing photography for six years! He bought himself a Canon EOS Digital Rebel XT two years in, and upgraded to the 40D in 2008. You can see more of his work on his deviantart page or at his homepage - www.freakalive.de. I think what's great about him is that he's not searching to the perfect picture - he just tries to have an eye for the right mood for each picture.
Tip of the Day:
Learn to use your camera's setting, or your camera will make life hard. I cannot tell you how many times I've disagreed with a camera on composition in the past year and a half. I'm still learning how to make my camera submit to my will. Anyhow, learn how to change your camera's ISO, F/Stop, Shutter Speed, Zoom, Focus Mode, and everything thing else, because it gives you more control.
Scores:
Overall: 4/5
Composition:3.5/5
Emotion:3.5/5
Innovation: 4/5
Overall: I'm really digging this photo. I love the angle of the building, and the hue of the sky.
Composition: I don't really like the lamp or the shadows on the building - they're slightly distracting - but the rest of this piece is very strong. If this were an add for a hotel, I could totally see the text being right where all the leading lines point.
Emotion: This photo gives me the same feeling that all the really big buildings in New York City - a kind of claustrophobic awe. The building looms very well. And I guess it wouldn't loom quite as well without the lamp post to give us perspective.
Innovation: I don't get to take/see pictures like this very often, because I live in a small town. I think the angle is very creative.
About Chinographer:
This guy's been doing photography for six years! He bought himself a Canon EOS Digital Rebel XT two years in, and upgraded to the 40D in 2008. You can see more of his work on his deviantart page or at his homepage - www.freakalive.de. I think what's great about him is that he's not searching to the perfect picture - he just tries to have an eye for the right mood for each picture.
Tip of the Day:
Learn to use your camera's setting, or your camera will make life hard. I cannot tell you how many times I've disagreed with a camera on composition in the past year and a half. I'm still learning how to make my camera submit to my will. Anyhow, learn how to change your camera's ISO, F/Stop, Shutter Speed, Zoom, Focus Mode, and everything thing else, because it gives you more control.
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