Kimi 5 by Tienlove

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Scores
Overall: 4/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 4/5

Overall:
I really like the lighting and the pose. I think black and white was a good choice. There are just a few things I'd change.

Composition:
First, I'd like to say that the lighting is beautiful. It's very summery. I'd like to see more of her hands. Also, I think the photo would be a little nicer if the line where the grass stops wasn't going through her head, or wasn't shown at all.

Emotion:
This photo is very summery, like I said. Kimi looks somewhat happy, and contemplative, as though she reflecting on how nice the day is, or something. It's very nice.

About deviant:
Tien has been a photographer for about two months. She hasn't got a favorite shot; she just takes pictures of whatever catches her eye. Her blog is Paradigm Drift.

Tip of The Day:
Remember the Fffs of photography: Focus, forsight, and fun. Remember to focus when you shoot things, as well and keep your shots in focus. Have the foresight to notice the flaming chicken in the background. Have fun taking pictures of the flaming chicken, instead.