How To Fix Everything by Ohhey25

Today's Critique brought to you by: Ohhey25

Scores
Overall: 3.5/5
Composition: 3.5/5
Emotion: 4/5

Overall:
I like the emotion present in this photo, as well as the interesting vignette. There are a few distractions.

Composition:
I like the contrast between her coat and the frame, and the frame and her face. I might have chosen a different coat for this shot, as the current one somewhat blends with the background near the bottom. I'd also like to see more of the frame and her elbow. I like the leading line of her finger pointing to her eyes. It's also a bit noisy around her eyes, I think.

Emotion:
She looks troubled. The slightly burnt effect of the vignette makes my mind wander down paths to find itself at a conclusion that her house burnt down and the frame is all she has left. Very nice emotion; good job.

About Ohhey25:
She started film photography in her junior and senior years of high school, which was five years ago. She didn't pick up photography again until last summer, and says she officially been into photography for eight months. Her favorite kinds of shots are portraits, particularly portraits that utilize they beauty of the subjects eyes. "They express a lot of emotion and are very beautiful," she says.

Tip of The Day:
While the stress of taking a digital photography class can sometimes drive you to madness, it's a very beneficial experience.