Monday, March 15, 2010
Still by My-Colorless-Project
Today's Critique brought to you by: My-Colorless-Project
Scores
Overall: 3.5/5
Composition: 3/5
Emotion: 3.5/5
Overall:
I like the lighting. There are a few distractions, as with every photo.
Composition:
I'd like to see more of the ferris wheel. The thing in the bottom right corner is kind of distracting. I like the space on the left, I feel it gives the ferries wheel a more whimsical feel. I think maybe color would have been a better choice for this photo. I like the lighting, though it could be a bit lighter.
Emotion:
The lighting you've got going on here strikes me as more of a Zombie-Land carnival of horror kind of lighting - with that in mind, I'd like to see more Zombies (I'm kidding). I think brighter lighting would give this more of a fair/carnival feel.
About deviant:
Melly has been trying photography for around a year, and yet she still doesn't consider herself to be a photographer. She, too, doesn't have a favorite, and just like shooting things that catch her eye and give her ideas for her own photos. If you like her work on My-Colorless-Project, she's got another account. However, I can't link it to you, because I'm lame and didn't write it down.
Tip of The Day:
There are many online communities that can help you receive appreciation and critique for your photos.
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