Today's critique is brought to you by xXxCelineChanxXx.
Scores:
Overall: 3.5/5
Composition:3/5
Emotion:3.5/5
Innovation: 3/5
Overall: I like this photo quite a bit. The angle is quite nice, and I like that it's in black in white. There are just a few things - which will be explored below - that I'm not fond of.
Composition: So, there's a distraction in the top right corner, where, like, power lines cross the corner. I'd also like to see the vanishing point further to the right. I really like the contrast between the clouds and the street. Also, I think having the cars there makes it more interesting.
Emotion: This photo totally reminds me of the Beatles. The clouds seem a tad ominous to me, which is actually quite nice. I like your choice of black and white for this one, as it helps to keep the cars (which are probably in a plethora of colors) from distracting the viewer, as well as adding to the somewhat ominous feeling.
Innovation: It's been a while since I've seen something like this. This photo immediately brings to mind the Beatles, as well as the cover of American Gods (at least, the copy of the book I have). Anyhow, I like the combination.
A little bit about Celine:
She's been playing the photography game for about four years. Like me, she doesn't really have a favorite kind of shot, she just likes the ones that turn out awesome. Her gallery is pretty interesting - definitely worth a looksee.
Tip of the day:
Clouds and stuff can create different moods in your photo. In the same way, capturing a person unawares can create a great mood of its own - the kind of mood that makes you laugh. Seriously. Try it some time.
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Heehee I'm glad you like it! Though, I will say, that it IS kinda hard when you're just using a regular camera phone. Haha and a CHEAP one at that. =/
ReplyDeleteOH about the cars, funny thing is, those cars where coming RIGHT AT ME!! O.O
ReplyDeleteI literally had to move out the way immediatley after I took the shot. Lol